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 On November 13th, 2024, Fox introduced a moving rocket ship that it could manually control. There was an updating piece of text to its right that told you how many characters the rocket has traveled.
-At the time the rocket was a work in progress. Fox planned to give it the ability to move diagonally, as well as make it so that it preserves it text it passes over instead of deleting it; though in the meantime fox used the rocket as a tool for erasing spam.
+The rocket was a work in progress, and Fox planned to give it the ability to move diagonally, as well as have it preserve the text it passes over instead of deleting it; though in the meantime fox used the rocket as a tool for erasing spam.
-The rocket might have been inspired by [[Mr. Black|Mr. Black's]] car, a script that Fox had witnessed a few months prior.
+The rocket might have been inspired by [[Mr. Black|Mr. Black's]] car, a script that Fox had witnessed a few months prior. The car contained most of the features that Fox had planned to add with the exception of an odometer.
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